Talk:The Homestar Runner Series/The Strong Sad Wets Yonder Bed

Hey there! That's a pretty good story that you got there. Certainly was a part of me when I saw the storybook in the toon "The Homestar Runner Gets Something Stuck In His Craw" that wanted "The Strong Bad Wets Yonder Bed" to be a reality. A satire on children's books that cover similar subject matter. However, if I perhaps may make a critique. There wasn't a lot of dialogue in this one, where as the other children's book parodies on Homestar Runner (dot-com) have characters talking a bit between the narrator just... describing the events that take place. Also, it would have been neato burrito if it had wrapped up with the moral being a tad more obvious, because I'm sure there was a sentimental ending implied. Strong Sad did get Bubs's Thirty Cent Lunch Special, after-all. Anyway, great work! Looking forward to seeing more from you on the wiki. --Kidstar (talk) 12:01, 15 June 2020 (UTC)